Monday, November 8, 2010

Sour Worm poem with similes

Eating sour worms

Sour worms are like a sweet sour kick
That make you cough.
They get stuck in your teeth like toffee.
When I eat sour worms
My mouth explodes
Like a volcano of sourness.

By Jack B Year 4

2 comments:

  1. That is a good poem Jack. I like how you said my mouth explodes.
    By Macaulay

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  2. Great poem jack, you really used good adjectives and similes, i look forward to seeing more work.

    Mollie, Room7

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